Thursday, 29 March 2012

Question 5- Annotations Of Design Work (Contents Page)

Feedback From Target Audience:
"I think that this contents page is very effective in the way that the aged editing on the background photograph contrasts well with the black and burgundy text- giving it a sophisticated and elegant look. Also, the small picture/preview of the double page spread at the bottom is very useful and intrigues the reader. One criticism would be that the writing is not quite big enough and, due to the fact that it is in an elaborate font, is not easy to read at a first glance."- Lucy Crees.


"This contents page offers consistency throughout the magazine in terms of the editing on the photo and the colour of the text on the page. Also, i like that 'Contents' is written down the side as it is different to most music magazine contents pages. One thing that i would criticise would be that the text could be made bigger and bolder so that it becomes easier to read."- Saskia Winch. 



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