Thursday, 29 March 2012

Question 5- Annotations Of Design Work (Double Page Spread)

Feedback From Target Audience:
"Something i think that is successful about this double page spread is the fact that it is conventional. The structure of the article and the features within it are accurate and appealing. I like the way that the photograph overlaps onto both pages and acts as a background to the double page spread, dominating the magazine and immediately signalling to readers who the article involves. Something that i think could perhaps be improved on this double page spread is the structure of the article. Although its quality and content is of a good standard, so as to make the article less overwhelming to readers it could be broken down into a question and answer format so that readers are more willing to thoroughly consume the text."- Lucy Crees.


"I think this double page spread is very effective and eye-catching as it matches the front cover and contents page in terms of colour scheme and overall 'feel'. One thing that i would alter would be the colour and size of the pull quote- i would make it stand out more to grab the readers attention by making it a brighter colour and enlarging it."- Saskia Winch








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